Ahh kattayl that was a good one. Loved the boys splitting then finding each other again. Clever way of introducing them to Santana. Nicely done.
ingin6
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Subject: Re: Applause and Feedback Mon May 01, 2023 6:43 pm
UK_Rachel74: I liked it a whole bunch. Maybe?? Heyes will remember to not be so hard on the Kid when he is forced to draw the next time as HE left them ''BUSTED by pushing his luck at poker. I think that Kid needs a really special birthday present.
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rachel741
Posts : 102 Join date : 2019-09-15 Age : 50 Location : United Kingdom
Subject: Re: Applause and Feedback Sun May 21, 2023 2:19 am
UKRachel74: Wow!! Highly intense. Kid trying to keep his feelings in so that Heyes won't feel worse than he already does. I agree, how could the Alcalde go thru with this when he knew it was wrong. Danny Bilson and Hector, what a collection of low-lifes. Makes for one horrible nightmare, so glad that that was all it was. A really great story, would have made a great Halloween story.
Kattayl: oh this is good. The Dark Lady, sounds so mysterious and it was. A good thing that he had a really great time before his instincts kicked in and he listened to them. I wonder what Kid was doing while Heyes was so occupied.? hmmmmm
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ingin6
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Subject: Re: Applause and Feedback Mon Oct 30, 2023 6:03 pm
InsideOutlaw: This is great, loved it. Poor Kid hope he got the molasses out of his hat, His horse's favorite daydream, loved it. Boy that woman sure had Heyes down pat, I don't see evil in you but I see mischief. Your a liar and a thief and proud o' both and your name ain't Arthur, and we love him anyway. Yeah, I bet Grandpa Curry's story could be really scary.