Good morning, everyone. I have a request for anyone who feels up to the challenge. Now that I'm free to begin the revising of my story, I'm scared to start! Maybe I just need to take a break from it for a few days, and let things settle. It has been suggested that TOF is too long for a first publication, so I though that I would write it as three different books, like Lord Of The Rings (no literary comparison intended). But that will be quite a challenge, as it would mean changing the whole format. I'm also trying to come up with another title for it. Twist of Fate is so common; there's loads of fanfic and published works out there, with that title. It would be nice to have something a little more original. I thought of "They Rode Together", but then realized that in my story, they spend very little time, actually together. So that doesn't really work. I think, I want a title that suggests two people who are closely bonded, but forced apart by circumstances. Any suggestions, anybody?