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Admin
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Join date : 2013-08-24
| | Subject: Haikus Sun Feb 23, 2014 3:01 pm | |
| I have been asked to add a Haikus section. Map admits this this is not an area with which she is familiar but was given the following as an example: syllables 5, 7, 5; 3 lines long: loquacious, he spoke/his words flowed over my head/overwhelming me I'm sure the Haiku experts on the board will give us examples but the following link gives us a good guide and has examples. I'll have to try the Haiku thing myself! It looks fun. Haiku (俳句 high-koo) are short poems that use sensory language to capture a feeling or image. They are often inspired by an element of nature, a moment of beauty or a poignant experience. Haiku poetry was originally developed by Japanese poets, and the form was adapted to English and other languages by poets in other countries. http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Haiku-Poem |
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Javabee
Posts : 811
Join date : 2013-09-08
Age : 63
Location : Seattle
| | Subject: Re: Haikus Sat Mar 01, 2014 11:38 am | |
| I have no experience with Haiku either, dear MAP. But here goes:
The coin flips once more
No doubt it’s an honest toss
Brown eyes smile at blue _________________ "If I asked for a cup of coffee, someone would search for the double meaning." Mae West  |
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Remuda
Posts : 823
Join date : 2013-08-25
Age : 44
| | Subject: Re: Haikus Wed Jun 18, 2014 7:50 pm | |
| Cards dealt, the dark-eyed
Man peeked slowly. Poker-faced,
He tossed them. "I fold."
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Fast is fine, but accuracy is everything. ~ Wyatt Earp
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APothecary
Posts : 539
Join date : 2013-11-03
Location : The wild western side of the Wolds
| | Subject: Re: Haikus Tue Jul 22, 2014 2:52 am | |
| Pine shadows on still
Surface, shattered into sharp
Glistening fragments.
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:shock: The Medicine Man sits on the stage,
Eats fire and water, earth and air while we all stare.
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APothecary
Posts : 539
Join date : 2013-11-03
Location : The wild western side of the Wolds
| | Subject: Re: Haikus Tue Jul 22, 2014 2:53 am | |
| Summer soft whispers;
Aspen shivering baseless
Rumours of the wind.
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:shock: The Medicine Man sits on the stage,
Eats fire and water, earth and air while we all stare.
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APothecary
Posts : 539
Join date : 2013-11-03
Location : The wild western side of the Wolds
| | Subject: Re: Haikus Tue Jul 22, 2014 3:08 am | |
| Acrid powder scent.
Fire fractured ores washed out from
Heaving, riven earth.
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:shock: The Medicine Man sits on the stage,
Eats fire and water, earth and air while we all stare.
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Javabee
Posts : 811
Join date : 2013-09-08
Age : 63
Location : Seattle
| | Subject: Re: Haikus Thu Jul 24, 2014 10:56 am | |
| _________________ "If I asked for a cup of coffee, someone would search for the double meaning." Mae West |
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APothecary
Posts : 539
Join date : 2013-11-03
Location : The wild western side of the Wolds
| | Subject: Re: Haikus Tue May 12, 2015 11:39 pm | |
| Warm sandbanks threaten
Summer; swift shadow flit, still
The single martin.
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:shock: The Medicine Man sits on the stage,
Eats fire and water, earth and air while we all stare.
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APothecary
Posts : 539
Join date : 2013-11-03
Location : The wild western side of the Wolds
| | Subject: Re: Haikus Wed May 13, 2015 12:03 am | |
| And what's to stop us creating haiku cycles?
Garden (Lauds to Prime)
Collared mother priest
Ensconced in cherry pulpit;
Plainsong for the dawn.
Evergreen chorale
Response, holly chancel arch
Endlessly redrawn.
Wind moved rafters flick
Across the nave, paint sun tile
Patterns on the lawn.
Absolutely nothing to do with Alias Smith & Jones of course...
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:shock: The Medicine Man sits on the stage,
Eats fire and water, earth and air while we all stare.
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Stepha3nie
Posts : 5084
Join date : 2014-07-12
Age : 51
Location : Scotland
| | Subject: Re: Haikus Wed May 13, 2015 4:09 pm | |
| Never mind, Apothecary, as long as they paint such beautiful, vivid pictures of nature.
How do you do it? Consider me amazed.
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"I can resist everything - except temptation" Oscar Wilde
For me temptation is Hannibal Heyes, especially in chaps!
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Nancy Whiskey
Posts : 2704
Join date : 2013-10-14
Location : The Rusty Bucket Saloon
| | Subject: Re: Haikus Sat May 16, 2015 10:14 am | |
| Wow, what else can I say?!?
S3 nailed it in her applause!
... and I think I am clever if I manage to pay the milkman on time.
Well done, very evocative!
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Tomorrow I will no longer be reckless or feckless. I will do everything with both reck and feck!
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Stepha3nie
Posts : 5084
Join date : 2014-07-12
Age : 51
Location : Scotland
| | Subject: Re: Haikus Sun Jun 14, 2015 10:16 am | |
| This is not ASJ, but about my avatar. And horses have some connection to ASJ...
Sam Jo
Proudly arched dark neck
Sunlight dancing sparks on mane
Horse prince's eyes shine
He loved his outings in Windsor Great Park. When it was his turn to be unloaded from the horse box, he would always first stop at the top of the ramp and take a look around. He looked like a king on his throne, surveying his kingdom.
He enjoyed to move and loved a gallop. It was like a dream, flying along on him. I miss him very much. For me he'll always be this proud prince of a horse who loved to run.
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"I can resist everything - except temptation" Oscar Wilde
For me temptation is Hannibal Heyes, especially in chaps!
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