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PostSubject: Re: Applause and Feedback   Sat Oct 07, 2017 7:56 am

Still back in September...


Riders: Glad to see your bunny hop! In Brume you have created a classic fat-cat villain, greedy and vile, someone we love to hate. I think he may have met his match in our two cowboys, who seem determined to save the damsels in distress. Your piece is colorful, descriptive, and leaves us wanting more.

Nell: Kid is in tune with the mood and needs of the gang, and once convinced, Heyes had a great idea on what to do. The gifts were so creative and thoughtful, I loved reading about each one. Everyone loves a birthday party, and it was fun to see our gang of outlaws acting with such childlike enthusiasm.

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